3 Feb 2006

not today.
the thoughts again
the serious tumult of things
blacking out the vision of my wants
seamlessly flowing, like
a rippling rage.
confusion
that word again
striking out, echoing.
three stumps in lush green fields.
me sitting in the stands
against the winds
watching.
i pull the cap
down on my forehead
closing my eyes to the sun... and the sun
i can't think anymore
pause. stop. halt.
freeze.


1:43pm and counting.

10 comments:

  1. Anonymous3:05 pm

    closing my eyes to the sun... and the sun
    i can't think anymore
    pause. stop. halt.
    ....
    time to sleep and give your mind and body some rest before the letter on the monitor starts to look blurrrrreeeeedddddd

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  2. it's not so simple ranga.. more than just that... but do keep visitin and readin..

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  3. Roof,
    Ranga is right.Please get sleep when you can.

    And as for me, I think that after those seeming YEARS in the COLD studio,some sun is definitely good for all of us.

    Please go to amma when you can,di.

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  4. sun... amma... doesn't go raag ;).. mayb thatha... but i get the drift... :)

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  5. sun... amma... doesn't go raag ;).. mayb thatha... but i get the drift... :)

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  6. Anonymous5:22 pm

    zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...is the remedy!!

    with or without....

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  7. hmm... thank u anonymous... keep visiting... but honestly... it's not only abt zzzzzzzzzzzzz guys...

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  8. Anonymous9:17 pm

    ok... now you are wide awake...good

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  9. hey!!!! nice man... very nice... i like the abrupt short clauses u use... it's the way i think when there are too many thots in my head and also when i'm overwhelmed with info... sounds like us rite now... but this is just me... i also like the juxtaposition of the sun ... and the thots freezing... lovely... icy HOT!!! very nice roops... didn't know that u write so much poetry n r good at it too... HUGS n Love.

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  10. Dont you wish that you have Insomnia?! ;-)

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